SuperMcGuffin64's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's The Bomberman]

Not sure if you take critiques. Bomberman's anatomy & proportions could've been improved by...

-Making his head, hands, & feet a bit bigger, along with making his body a bit smaller.

-Make his limbs small or medium & consistently mildly thick or thin.

-Try to make the poses less stiff, a bit more cartoonishly dynamic.

SpaceyMcSpacer responds:

Thanks, I do accept criticism btw.

I was trying to aim for something taller and atomical (Like Super R but a bit taller) but I do admit that I could easily improve a lot of aspects of this especially the thickness of the body. My poses also tend to be stiff sometimes my 2nd Bomberman is better at being cartoony.

[Sonic holding a hot dog and vibin]

Some of Sonic's proportions looks off (the arms & hands especially). I recommend to use various official artwork of Sonic as references to help yourself improve drawing Sonic.

Motwera responds:

Thanks for the feedback, McGuffin!

I have definitely used some official artwork from Tyson and other bits as reference, but I do need to be more particular and confident next time I do something like this. The refs definitely helped quite a bit and will be using more or better ones next time.

BTW, the hands were drawn using reference artwork of Sonic's hand postures.

[sonic fingergun blast]

Aww, kawaii.

[Sonic the Mario]

Sonic looks cute & cuddly wearing Mario's hat & cape.

[DISNEY]

Looks decent, but the handwritten pixel style text that spell out Disney could use some improvements.